So love me with the teeth of a chainsaw,
Split me open with your tenderness,
As I lay upon my fantasies gazing the skies,
I shall be awaken when all this is over.
I have been robbed by any source of energy,
Spellbound by your star-filled stare,
Soon to realise that the stars soon morphed
Into the flames of selfish human nature.
So I was puppetted into your 2 faced deceit,
The 'love' that you fed was keeping me alive,
Yet I wear the scars to remind me every morning,
How foolish I was to let you into my core..
My throat feels intensive of constant crying,
Loneliness. Sweetly gracing me with it's glory,
Yet a smile hides it all from the peering nation,
How joyous I am of my trustworthy mask.
Human concern reminds me I am still alive,
I need my cover to help me survive..
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Like Ive said many a time, I don't do rhythm to perfection, but enjoy anywayz
Written September 28th, 2005
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Aww, thank you again for your lovely comment, glad to see that my brain thought of good lines hehe!
Take care of yourself xXx -
Wow...That was great; a truely remarkable piece of work. I could really feel the agony in this. It takes the reader back to a time when their heart was broken. The words are very powerful. I am particularly fond of these lines:
"Spellbound by your star-filled stare,
Soon to realise that the stars soon morphed
Into the flames of selfish human nature.
So I was puppetted into your 2 faced deceit,
The 'love' that you fed was keeping me alive,
Yet I wear the scars to remind me every morning,
How foolish I was to let you into my core.."
They remind me of how I felt when my relationship with my first pig, I mean boyfriend, was over. Thank you for sharing this great piece of poetry. -
Aw, thank you very much
your comment is greatly appreciated 
Take care xXx -
this is really good. i love your word choice and the overall message. great write!
~write on
-Jenny
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