All alone in my own place
thinking there is noones face
no smile there to help me out
nothing else to talk about
noone here to help me feel
that this whole life i live is real
lend a hand to hold me high
to use my voice and wonder why
give me life and show me love
ease trouble and hold me above
above the hell above the pain
so I can feel some hope again
all alone in my corner
looking out on the world
thinking about the harm thats been
the harsh words that it's hurled
want some relief, some tender touch
want some help.....
o so much
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Written September 28th, 2005
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its hard to be alone and easy to wonder why, well written from the heart
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I know this feeling all too well. When I look back at the world I can see everything you've said. Reading this broughta tear to my eye. This is the past that I've lived and I've been scared that one day I'll have to go back into living it again.
My advice, take love from everybody. That way there will always be someone you can turn to when you're feeling down.
And never forget to stop smiling.
Edited on Sep 29, 9:23 because 'typo'. -
your poem is really good... i feel thie way alot of the time too......
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Good job. A relatable piece.
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