lencio-sunchild
Lencio-sunchild, a poet like few,
Everyday he is writing anew.
Never a bad word for any to say,
Commenting poems each night and each day.
India's mightiest poet is he,
Open his poems and read, you will see.
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Sit back and relax, and he'll show you all,
Uncanny imagery he can recall.
Nobody ever I've met on the net
Comes close enough even, to be any threat.
His choices of words in his poetry,
Is wonderful done, that you must agree.
Lencio-sunchild, my friend, I thank you,
Dearest your friendship, to me it is true.
© Jim T. Henriksen
September 28th, 2005
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This poem was written as a tribute to my friend lencio-sunchild. You can find lencio-sunchild's work at allpoetry.com/poets/lencio-sunchild ...
Written September 28th, 2005
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Hi, Lencio! Yes, it's been too long since we spoke, I've been little online lately since I work now. I am glad you still come back to read this, and still give me applause for it!
Ole and Monica is doing fine. She is now studying masters degree in English, and hope to be a professor one day. 
Jim
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I came here to read this today and it raised my spirits higher again, thanks Jim, it's been long we spoke. Hope all is well with you and Monica. How is little Ole?
Love andlight,
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Hi, Shahrzad! Yes, Lencio is a true friend. Thanks for the comment, and the applause!
Jim
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He should be a wonderful friend."Commenting poems each night and each day."That's really wonderful.Have you learned this fron him?
Shahrzad
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Hi, Lencio! I am glad you liked the image I found. Thanks for the comment! Jim
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Oh this is so beautiful again, I will update my page too. Thanks Jim, your friendship too means a lot to me. Love to Monica and little Ole.
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Thanks, Lady anairO, I am glad you like my poem. Lencio is a great friend, and deserved this poem. Thanks for the comment! Jim
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Very nicely penned, good piece!
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Joyce, sunny day, takes it with good humor. Thanks for the comment! Hope to win.
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You are definitely trying to give a whipping to Sunny? LOL.
Now I know this judging is gonna give a challenge and a half as I'm stumped by 4 LOL.
(didn't say who though). LOL
Marianne.
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Hi, sis! Getting jealous? Mwahaha!
Thanks for the wonderful words, and your heartwarming applause. When the muse comes over me, I just let it go.
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Bravo, Bravo, Bravo!!!
Brother dear, You have taken hold of the acrostics so well.
Trying to make your sister jealous are you. LOL What a wonderful tribute you just showed to lencio with this work of art. Your muse was definitely sitting on your shoulder for this one. You have my applause and best wishes in the contest for this work of art. Keep your pen filled and flowing. I love your work. Joyce
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Yeah, Lencio loved this one. Thanks for the good luck wishes, and for the applause! Jim
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I bet he just loved this, it was very nice thing for you to do for him. Good luck in the contest
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Thanks, Anna. Lencio is a great friend, and he deserved this poem. Thanks for the comment and the applause!
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I agree with you completely. He is my friend too. You have made a beautiful Acrostic about him. Very well done. Anna.
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Thanks, Linda! I appreciate your comments and your applause!
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awesome
WOW! starhiker you out did him today with this poem I enjoyed thoroughly/ great job !! YEAh! Linda
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Thanks, Kitty! I am just filled with love for my friends. A poem is coming your way soon, aswell... Thanks for the applause!!
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Aww. This is adorable! I love it You are so kind to your AP friends Jim! Must be why everybody loves you so much!!
One love,
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Thanks, Victor, for your kind words and your applause! I'm thrilled by your vote of confidence! I'm going got the gold hat!
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Thank you, Maria. Your words are heartwarming! Thanks for the applause, my friend! Rave on, Ray Von!
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Thank you for the comment, Pamela.
I appreciate your kind words, and your applause!
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really awesome poem jim!!! way to go!!! i bet you will win!!
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There is so many feelings and emotions in here, I can almost see them. What a wonderful rhyming acrostic you have just written. I wish you luck in the contest.
Maria -
Bravo!
Oh I love it when an Acrostic rhymes. This is great. Truly a wonderful tribute to an excellent poem. Well done. You handle Acrostic like a pro. Best of luck in this contest, though I doubt you will need it. ~Pam
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Thanks, Yunaleska! You flatter me.
Nooo! Don't give up on this contest even if my poem is entered there! You still may get silver! 
LOL! Just kidding. Thanks for the comment!
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LOL! Polly want a cracker?
You make me laugh, my friend...
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This is great! Wow! You write acrostics so well! I was thinking of entering but now seeing this I think I don't really have a chance. But I might change my mind. This is really sweet too and I enjoyed reading it.
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Pretty Polly! Pretty Polly. "Trilled" (bird seed) - ok, ok, I am being really horrible this morning - but you should know my weird sense of humour by now!
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Thank you, Lencio! I'm trilled that you like the poem. Hope to see it on your page, that will be the best way you could thank me. Thanks for the comment and the applause!
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Thanks for the critique and your applause, Storic. I've used some of your suggestions. Writing acrostics are not difficult at all, it get's a bit tougher when you add rhyme, rythm, or other rules... But give normal acrostic a try first, and you will see it's not hard to write at all!
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Thanks for the comment, Manoj!
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Dear Jim,
For yet another time you have made me speechless by your thoughtfulness, and I dont know what to say. Thank you so very much for making a poem in my honor. You make me very glad. I will always be here on AP and this will too. I am glad we share a lot thru this wonderful site that makes life so nice.
Thank you once again and God Bless!!!
Love and light,
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good one
Now this is a good Acrostic - er I think - 'cos this type of poem is new terrority to me.
I really liked this one, BUT, a couple of things to bring to your attention - only 'cos it's a competition poem.
"I ndias' mightiest poet is he,2 - inverted comma after 's'.
"U ncanny imagery he can recall." - missed out 'e' in imagery.
"I s wonderfully done, that you must agree." I think this should be "wonderfully" not "Wonderful"
Having been pedantic - and not meaning to be - I think this is a clever Acrostic and wish I could manage a sucessful poem like this.
Thanks for sharing and I think this is deserving of an applause at least.
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Wow!! excellent poem dear for Lencio.
Cheers for Starhiker!
manoj
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