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Ia!

Ia!  Ia!  Cthulhu R'lyeh fthagn!
Watch out or we'll all be loggin'!
And wearing a bright tobbogan!
The High Priest will eat your noggin!

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Written September 27th, 2005

A contest entry

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  • Fallen Dreamer
    December 20, 2005
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    lol, someone obviously doesnt get it. ah for useless comments.

  • pozo
    December 20, 2005
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    Interesting piece Keep writing, I like how you used 2 languages here Great flowing piece
    All the best
    Pozo


  • Patrick Walz
    October 7, 2005
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    AY AY AY, Dreamer, you have undoubtedly incured the wrath of the unholy Cthulhu (my plush Cthulhu is staring upon me disapprovingly), but this is absolutely hilarious! One would think it would be difficult to lampoon Lovecraft, but you've managed it effectively! This kind of reminds me of "Spam-ku".

    Great, funny stuff!
    Patrick


  • Sinfiend
    September 28, 2005
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    Haha. Well, you certainly have taken a different approach to it, than I expected most to, but not in a bad way. Well done, good luck in the contest.