You say you want to die
That it is all you can think about.
The Grim Reaper is always listening
But is it your time?
Your mind is thinking of violence
Of blood and mutilation
The anger inside is raging
Like a towering inferno.
You think the only good place to be
Is in hell with the damned.
But do you really know what it is like there?
You hate the world
And everything in it
You feel it has done nothing for you.
Quite whining and complaining and get off your ass!
You will only get out of life
What you put in to it.
There is no silver platter
No silver spoon or bell
Unless you buy it yourself.
You will die
In all due time
But don’t sit back and wait for it.
If you really want to die
Don’t sit around and waist my time.
Make your way through the darkness
Until you reach the end.
Where we all know we will find you
Knocking on deaths door.
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Written January 22nd, 2003
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This was an awesome poem. I especially liked the last four lines.
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people that truly want to die that wish for death...do so quietly....for if someone wants to die they will....they wont whine..
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well its very nice work as always...Dar dark mood is haunting me from lines...But that's the thing I like....
sajonara
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Yes true this poem is harsh, but I like it, and in SOME ways I can re-late to it. Only the first few lines.. but I'm not a Lazy ass..:P So meh. But yes, Very good write! Keep up the good work! =]
*.x.*Silent Whispers*.x.*
Rae
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i love this poem, it sounds a lot like me, wanting to die i mean and realizing its not worth it. i dunno. its so good though. i like all of your poems i've read so far and hope you come back to write more soon
with much love
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Whoa girl! I love this..it's so...angsty!
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Many people should see this poem. And on a completely different note look at the sculls on the side and scroll really fast! it looks trippy.....well to me anyway
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this is harsh. but i like it. its very true. but the thing is i am depressed im trying as hard as i can to change and i feel the same way. but still depressed. its hard to see it from my point of veiw but i get what ur saying.
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neutral
oooooo ..lots of meaning? in that one..:) well done..again! -
excellent
The background is a very nice touch.
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