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True Love

True Love is hard to find
Not all know
Once you find it, Hold on tightly
For you never know what might happen
Cherish it for it is rare
Keep it Dear and close to you
For that other person will love you too!!

By: Darren Edge

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Written September 27th, 2005

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  • Ransomed-n-Redeemed
    November 9, 2006
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    very hard. I agree with HP91 above. *nods*


  • Alyss in Wonderland
    November 9, 2006
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    you know, it's hard to drive you crazy by leaving pointless comments on your poems and stuff, if....


  • DramaPunk
    October 30, 2005
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    hi its me
    Edited on Aug 03, 11:57 p.m. because 'because'.

  • KF poetry
    October 9, 2005
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    Aww, that's cute! Keep it up Darren!
    ~Felicia~

  • KF poetry
    September 28, 2005
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    Hey Darren...

    I like it I like it....You should show this to Liz if u havent already! See ya at school!

    Kevin

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