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Chewing Gum

Will you take this one up
Will you pass it around
will you tear it into peices
or simply toss it on the ground?
Get ready to get chewed
here come my words
I chew you out worse then ever
worse than the nerds.
atleast their kind
which is more than you can say
you cant stop me from writing
I'll do it anyway
your face is like a tunnel
deeped and dark
your hips are so wide
their like Noahs Arch.
You say I walk bad
You say I walk trampy
Atleast I can walk in heels
You look like Bambi.
but Bambi is cute
which is something your not
Now your eyes water
here comes the snot.
Need a tissue babe?
That's what I saw
I know you have a couple
check in your bra.
like i said before
i wont be deciving
but if you cant handle this
then i pray you are leaving.

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Written September 27th, 2005

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  • xJaimeex
    September 28, 2005
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    EXCELENT

    Nice. This flowed so well. And it made me smile an evil smile.
    You are talented.