Torn into pieces
Of jagged sharp edges
The shards of my heart
Will end all this madness
Condemned and ashamed
Feelings are numb
If you knew the truth
Would I still be so dumb?
Falling
Into a world so insane
I'm Falling
Into a relentless pain
You let go of my hand
I thought we were close
You let myself die
Hope you're satisfied
Collapsing remians
My feelings demolished
By the fist of your hate
Fueled by your rotten habbits
I'll take back the one thing
I'd change about you
If I could then I would
Roll and burn you
Falling
Into a world so insane
I'm falling
Into a relentless pain
You let go of my hand
I thought we were close
You let my soul die
I hope you're satisfied
Broken
Don't touch me I'm
Broken
Can't you see the tears in my eyes?
Broken
You are my demise
If I had the choice, I'd be sure that you die!
Falling
Into to a world so insane
I'm Falling
Into a relentless pain
You let go of my hand
I thought we were close
You killed all I had
I hope you're satisfied.
Author notes
Written September 27th, 2005
What did you think
Comments
-
Great song. Personally think it could be an excellent song if you get some good music. Sounds like heavy metal or new-metal. I loved it.
-
This was totally relatable unfortunately. There are many who are ready to burn us-doens't matter if it's a boyfriend, friend or family member-it all hurts and delivers unwanted pain. I think this would make a great song. Go for it!! Cheers~vj
-
great
very very good. You are a powerful writer -
this made me cry...immediately. i didnt even have to get thru half of it. amazing write, i'd record it for sure. amazing!
Adding your comment:
1 old applause
