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Lets talk please

Looking inside of my eyes
It was such a big surprise
its not a lie if you believe it
its not a mistake if its repeated
how could you say those things
when you know they don't mean anything
I'm miserable and your counting the clock
tick-tock-tick-tock
you keep your distance
but its all in least resistance
lets talk about it please...

the days alone in your room
and i
i can barely smile
i never said id take this
but even i did for a while
I've really gotta hand it to you

your a campaign of distraction
a delusion of infection
well I'm just not so sure
I'm not sure of anything, anymore
i should hate you for this
but this moment is pure bliss
excitement to my eyes
lets talk about it please...

the days alone in your room
and i
i can barely smile
i never said id take this
but even i did for a while
I've really gotta hand it to you

Ive really gotta hand it to you
I'm giving it to you

Author notes

im not quite sure
todays a bad today
Written September 27th, 2005

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  • ThisIsMyWonderland
    December 16, 2005
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    Ive really gotta hand it to you

    Edited on Dec 16, 7:54 p.m. because ''.


  • ThisIsMyWonderland
    September 27, 2005
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    Awe my tomika shamika! I love it <3 <3 you did a great job *********highfive***