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I Wish

In this life of mine I have wished for thousands of things
and not one of those wishes has ever come true.
But no dream or prayer or plea or wish can equal this one i wish now,
Because, now, I wish only for you.

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Written September 26th, 2005

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  • afishcalledjojo
    March 28, 2006
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    I like that, it is so beautiful. Short but sweet... I wish three..hehe.


  • January 28, 2006
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    short, simple and to the point. i love it. you didnt go overboard with bug words, you said what you needed to say and made it easy to read. I wish, too


  • January 14, 2006
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    Wow thats really good!


  • Sharon Corr gold member
    November 9, 2005
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    Beautiful Music.

    Dear Summedawn,
    “I Wish” is a beautiful prayer.
    I wished for nothing and everything
    came to be naturally. Your love touches
    my heart of hearts. I pray for your heart
    Wishing from your pen to God ears. May he hear
    Your wish and grant you love in eternal bliss.
    Namaste Blessed Be to you and yours eternally.


  • Teranika
    September 28, 2005
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    It's a good poem, full of emotion and feeling.

    In the third line, three words from the right, you didn't capitolize the "I" in the phrase. Other than that, it's good.

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