All I want
Is for you to see me
As the wings of desperation
That I embraced around your waist
Before I was wilted down
To the bone of hope
And found wanting.
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Does anyone have a spare hairband?
Written September 26th, 2005
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wow!
The words used are powerfu; and the sadness is poigant too. The personification is very good and brings the reader into the piece. The imagery is awesome too.
transit~
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Man, that was a powerful blast lof love!
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awesome! though it would hae been a little more useful when i was still 'in the moment' and knew what i was thinking when i asked for it. ^shrug^ oh well, yay!
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How is it that you are so wickedly talented? Seriously, it is almost edging the lines of erie. Yikes.
Oh, and I've a hairband if you need.
Justin -
so sad, yet so true. later Honeybe
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I've said this (many times) before, but you create some of the best imagrey I've ever seen. This was so simple, but so effective. Nice job.
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