seasonal changes weren’t supposed to
make you move with the wind
parting like leaves, falling from great trees
each branch, a memory
each root, a link- deeply earthed
sentimenting the soil
with forgotten drops of water
like salty tears from lonely hearts
and as you pack your boxes and plan
I can only wonder...who will be the next
to fill your sandy garden with love
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friends for months, he moved up here to live and having spent the summer here, is now leaving just as quickly as he came. Very good close friend...kinda sad!
Written September 26th, 2005
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bah! I'm sure it was all for the best. if you can't keep that one around, I'm sure you'll have tons of other suiters at your door! hey, maybe i should move up to ontario again....lol
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Beauty in verse describes a treasured friendship.Nice write.~~Suseann
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hey great write really liked how you have written this was great and i really enjoyed reading this great stuff mate and keep it up was graet to read this
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what can i say, that can explain how i feel about this poem just right.....um.....(limited vocabulay).. i loved it. i like how everything was explained and told. keep up the killer job, check ya later
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woah- thats like taking the thoughts right out of my head.. but using words I could never form. haha. Absolutley beautiful. really. and that sinks in deep for me right now. so glad I read this. <3 Peace
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