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Don't Flirt With Me Suicide

the sensual touch of a blade on my neck
razors caressing the inside of my thighs
I don't know how much more of this seduction I can take
don't let yourself get trapped in a corner
only to be raped by a bottle of Excedrin

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Written September 26th, 2005

A contest entry

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  • confused-boo
    March 23, 2007
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    eh

    i think it was okay
    <3


  • Annessia
    September 28, 2005
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    Wow,
    This is deep. This is horrifying, and I'm asking myself why I love it so much. It's so interesting, and moving. EYE catching. How else can I describe this? It's real. And, everyone at some point in theit lives, thinks about ending it...and, this explains it so well. "Flirt" is such a great word for it, lol. I would of never thought of something like that. I like that it's short too, and it's not looooonnnngggg and drawn out, it's to the point. I love it! Thanks for sharing, I hope to read more from you!


  • Reaper of the Heart
    September 28, 2005
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    kool

    KOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL I liked it
    Edited on Sep 28, 4:59 p.m. because ''.


  • Shadow of a Doubt
    September 28, 2005
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    Sad poem, and veeerrry depressing. I loved it!!!
    Fatally yours,
    Shadow xXx