The rain fell hard that ferocious night
Though it was other water falling when they saw that light
Five wounds pierced inside the Christian's heart
The Son of God transcended into a world apart
And it was in the depths of Hell we all saw God's might
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i'm not done yet, i'm still writing it, i'm just doen for now
Written September 26th, 2005
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It's a good poem/ beginning of poem, It flows well and the words are descriptive. I agree with your punctuation and spelling, and it was a good read.
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