finally called you back to let you know how I've been
I haven't been doing so good
my body is covered with bruises and I can barely move
I moved on though and I found someone else
I think I'm happy most of the time I can't really tell right now
my body is starting to grow numb
I'm tired of taking hot baths and showers to make the pain go away
it never works for more than a minute
I know I promised that I wouldn't put up with someone like this
I need to be with someone faithful and true
but that was the reason I chose to be with you
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In progress... I wanted it to be a twist at the end that the person that the guy friend is actually the boyfriend. Please comment! 
Written September 26th, 2005
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OMFG. This is so awesome. & let me tell you girl I hope ur a girl..... lol.... No one deserves to be treated wrong & to be beat on. My mom was beat by my dad for so many years, then she left him & he committted suicide. But U don't need someone like that. U can find so much better. My fiance treats me so good, & would never hit me more than a play hit or something like that. If he did I wouldn't be with him right now. But one of my b.f.'s started bein kinda like that b-4 & i broke up with him the second he pushed me & tried to hit me. But don't let no one treat u like that. U deserve to be treated so much better. Girls are put here to be loved not to be hit on & beat. If u need someone to talk to I'm here for ya. Great write & keep up the good work, & good luck, Jessica.
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great ending .. well not so great; but it was a twist ya know?
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