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Dark Red Rose(Haiku)

~~Blood red,scented rose~~
~~glorious aroma sensed~~
~~deep dark velveted.~~


   ~~Suseann~~

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Written September 26th, 2005

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  • sedatedthought
    January 12, 2006
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    great

    perfect way to describe this picture


  • The Eros
    September 29, 2005
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    that picture left quite an impact! infact when the poem is read by looking at the pic then at the line then back to the pic then back at the lines...you got the point right...it make it even more ..more ...more...oh GREAT! i've lost my words! see if i can find em..but let me tell ya this...its a great piece of poetry! i LOVED it


  • Autumn Whisper
    September 27, 2005
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    nice haiku suseann its very good i like roses a lot
    and the pic is so lovely
    i wish you the very best of luck in the contest
    best wishes as always
    Shimmering River


  • suseann
    September 26, 2005
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    Copy the rose picture if you like,it's just off Google.

  • Only My Words
    September 26, 2005
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    pretty and complete picture of a rose. like the photograph featured with the poem.


  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    September 26, 2005
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    Ahhhhh....I can smell that perfect red rose Suseann, even without the picture. Very nice...a haiku ey? Good job! Good luck in your contest.

    ~Lyrical

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