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A Bright Spot on the Parhelic Circle

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 Mountains come and mountains grow
 For iceswept miles do feet pray toll
    'Til heart divides the mount to valley
     Green shaded eye, blue colored sally
But if winter spills ice toward spring
And daisy transforms the heatless thing

Then earthen damns bring clouds' full run
And morning tears...dry in desert air 
                                                                                    
               'neath 
                                      golden  
                                                       mocksun

Author notes

It's that Irony God again
Diffracted ice crystals
Bright spot flawed sun

Written September 26th, 2005

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  • raggyann
    January 6, 2008
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    wow this was very awsome i like the lay out of this poem


  • luckynsincere
    September 27, 2005
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    Oh my.. I loved the form you used here! Your words were mighty strong, but the form made it even more powerful! I loved it!
    Melanie