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drowning

i told you i loved you
i told you i'd never let you down
i made a promise
and i intended to live it out

i only wanted
to be like you
i always thought that
i would never have a doubt

but now i'm drowning in the water
and my hand is reaching for you
youre reaching for me
but your arm can only stretch so far

i keep on sinking
i think i may drown in my own sin.

Jesus please save me
i know youre the only one who can
Jesus don't leave me
youre the only one i have

i can feel my lungs caving in
my heart is beating faster
every moment i waste
is only closer to the end

at the very pit of my being
i feel i'm fading
it's just this feeling i have
that i won't make it out alive

i dont know what to do
i'm shaking in my skin
if you can hear my praying
please save me again

i'm drowning
slowy sinking
my head is now consumed
i think i may drown in my own sin

here comes my savior
he's jumping in the water
he raises me up
so that i can live

now my Jesus is drowning
and i can't get him out
the only way for me to live
is for him to drown

with tears flowing down
i cry out,"i'm not worthy"
but Jesus dosnt care
to him everyone is worth it


so now i wont let him down
i will praise him every day
i will love him always
and he will never be replaced

Author notes

This one goes out to Jesus! He is my savior and i will love him forever!
Written September 26th, 2005

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  • cannilickureye
    December 29, 2005
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    no more listening to underoath while you write your poems k?
    jk jk
    well not really
    i can tell this was influenced by abbrlbnw