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Friends

They stand beside me
And fall when I fall
They help me get back up
They are there when I call

They cry when I cry
The smile when I smile
They laugh when I laugh
Like me, they are versatile

Of all the bad things I've done
I must have done something right
To have friends like these
Who in my name they will fight

To these people I say
Thank you

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Written September 26th, 2005

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  • Thedragonisgone
    October 29, 2006
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    Ah, a fiesty tribute to your friends. That was what this contest is about. Thanks for entering.


  • I am a Mindfreak
    September 27, 2005
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    It's great when you have fans that you know will always be on your side.

    There are a few friends I have that are my best friends in the world, one I've known for almost 22 years.

    And it's great when you know they'll always defend you, no matter what.

    And even if problems may occur between you and them, you'll always find a way around them.

    Great write and keep uo the good work.


  • September 27, 2005
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    Hey brother, I thank you for this poem, it was well written and appreciated very much. I love the background for it as well, it fits the poem well. Farewell, brother, Lost Crow Child


  • RealEyezRealize
    September 26, 2005
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    your welcome lol awesome write my friend.... keep up the good work !!!


  • Dust In The Wind
    September 26, 2005
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    i couldnt ask for better friends. :-)


  • Touchof1der silver member
    September 26, 2005
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    This is a wonderful tribute to those who have befriended and you are right... friends do all of this and so much more when they love and care for us.
    ♥ Touchof1der

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