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Passion's Reverie

Tell me of the things we once did
from the moment you and I held to that very first kiss

Show this body the yearn it aches for
in the nights that long to lust...
                                          take me to that place

Give me the searing heat just
to burn away all forms of doubt -
just to return the favor right
back to you

Time for some reason, has stopped
for the lust is all too demanding...
                                       remember that moment

As from eons before
us; don't look away
stare straight to me

As the embrace amplifies
what is going on,
my body screams of wanton
plreasures...
                                      let's soar high together

Rolling over my turn
to show what you've done
to me...
                                     I will make you burn

Brazen fires lick
and inch to more of
what isn't yet explore
this I simply implore
for you and I shall
explore...
                               just your smoldering eye says it all

Explosions intercede
not only for you but
of...- no our needs

No turning back just
from this embrace
nothing will break this
marvelled longing out
of place

Author notes

yea its corny i know
Written September 25th, 2005

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  • B Chandler
    September 25, 2005
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    lol i thought i was logged off lol


  • Darknight poet
    September 25, 2005
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    SORRY MENT TO APPLAUDE A MINUTE AGO LOL


  • Darknight poet
    September 25, 2005
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    NOT CORNY ACTUALLY A DEEP WRITE
    I HAD VISIONS OF ONE I ONCE KNEW WITH THIS NOT THE BEST BUT EHH
    GOOD WRITE RAE