Long nights
I need no advice
For staring at space
The time that I waste
Hypnotized
By your lunar eyes
And this magic place
The time that I waste
And you say "forgive me..."
But what can I do?
Follow these dreams
Or stay here...
Stay here with you.
Blown days
I spin through your maze
And multiply
The reasons I die
Warm rain
I guess I'm insane
But dignified
The reasons I die
And you say "forgive me..."
But what can I do?
Follow these dreams
Or stay here...
Stay here with you.
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Written September 25th, 2005
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hmmm
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...thought I smelled something.
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You? it gave me chlymidia.
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This song makes me ache.
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lol i love you jer..you make me laugh
msg me when its up, i'd love to hear it.
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- ahhh- a pick up song- Who'da thunk you had ulterior motives?
I like this- it feels softer than some of your work. A more gentle touch comes through here.
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No, I literally wrote it yesterday...
But I'm planning on recording it
this week sometime. it's loads pretty
So, I plan on crooning it to the honeys
So's I met net the bunnies. -
then back to my first question... have you got it posted up anywhere in song fashion yet?
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ah, a lament, yes...
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How I love poems and lyrics that are simple simple simple, but filled with meaning that jumps out and slaps ya . You know, I went to Austin this weekend for the Austin music festival and one of the stages was devoted to local artists. After hearing some of your stuff through the links you post here, I would say you could have rocked many of them off the stage .
Anyway, for what it is worth, I like this one very much. It is straightforward and to the point, yet very musical even without the music. -
Not at all, I've met Lisa, and she's quite talented.
This song is in the key of d-minor and it sounds like
an old spanish folk song actually, a lament (if you will). -
do you have this one posted up as song yet? it..oddly enough reminds me of Stay by lisa loeb...hopefully you dont find that insulting.
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The repeating lines are strong. I'm not sure about the message, but it might probably sound better in song.
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Well done what a terrific write .Loved it .
Liked the flow of this one and the repartition at the end .
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