She spreads her wings over the moon
With each silvered thread
A lovers' prayer is answered
She beckons them in soft whispers
As they slowly enter her world
~~Come to me soon~~
She sings so sweetly her siren song
Moonbeams dance in her eyes
Bewitching her prey
She knows,where they belong
All doubts lost in time
~~You belong~~
Her delicate web shines under midnight blue skies
Beguiled by her beauty
Captured by her ebony eyes
For woven in time
She waits silently calling to your mind
~~Reflections of her eyes~~
~~You become lost in a moment of time~~
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Written January 21st, 2003
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again great
the danger of being drawn in by the siren's sweet song.
the danger of entering the web of promise and dream of passion and love.
the moon calls, her arms open, her lips moist and parted?
all this in a great write.
i never tire of your words.
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Delightful.
This was a beautiful read filled with wonderful images that cascaded one after another in my mind. The subtle passion enveloped me like a warm needed hug. I truly enjoyed reading these words of yours.
Catch -
don't touch it!
I love this one--really I do. See I place my verdict at don't touch it.
Damon D. Brewer -
don't touch it!
excellent, Gill:) beautiful language and imagery:)
*hugs*
bonnie -
don't touch it!
Nice haunting feel here Gill. Well done -tj- -
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i like this... a woman or a spider...:-) felt like i was trapped in her web. Nicely done, i enjoyed this.
~ Wendy -
don't touch it!
Chilly this is wonderful!!!!Very lovely!!!!~Laura -
don't touch it!
Gill, this is beautiful. I love the picture you have painted for us with your imagery. You have bewitched us with the sheer loveliness of this write. As usual, another excellent write Gill. Again, you made me smile. Thank you.
Mike -
LOLOL nope..not seen her on for a while..:( hope everything is ok..I found a nice pic to go with this..it was the inspiration...but the bugger wont load even though it's the right size lmao... ack!!!!
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excellent
Pretty, pretty, thought you were writing about Susan at first lol..
Barbsxx -
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Oh Gill this is lovely the imagery is wonderful. You know I love that moon girl! Hey how are you? I miss you . :)
Red -
don't touch it!
I get lost in a moment when i read your poems gilly :) Cheesy... but still.
They tend to grab me...
Jadey xXxXx -
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:) PRetty love, and it's nice to be lost in that moment that you finally feel found ..only sucks when it ends :| ..but I keep hearing it doesn't always end, and seeing as how I'm such an optimist ;) I'll hold on to that.
Goodooooodddoooooddoooodd writing gill :D
Love you.
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