Tenderness with just a simple caress
Holding you deep with an embrace just to whisper sweet words...
To here, we are as one being -just not here to impress
Bust alas you and i shall sit here on the wet ground listening to the birds
Daydreaming away what has been told so I straight-forwardly say
Tenderness with just a simple caress
'Tis the longing of what is between the beating hearts; pray
Here we are, just the two of us, our love singing out a confess...
In this moment my mind wonders with such a questionable mess
From the days of the past to this time right now
Tenderness with just a simple caress--
Emotionally and with reverence, I make you a vow.
Such passion blazing throughout our eyes
Fear ripping through as together love is singing without guess
'Twas on this night, Confined to greatest whispered sighs;
Tenderness with just a simple caress
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Elusive Butterfly
...yea this quatern sucks lol
Written September 25th, 2005
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it is not a quatern! a quatern has eight syllables per line (see contest page for the format) though you are dropping down the repeat line here your line lenght is way over eight
thank you for entering your piece and good luck to you - spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...
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lol did so but its not my best though
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Thank you for your entry into our contest, I wish you the best of luck and will be back soon to give a proper critique. La
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