A wind blows from the north and I cry,
Things were better when you were by my side,
I'm all alone now, and wishing for something better,
I wish so I didn't fail so often,
I'm riding the ebbs and flows,
My heart is low,
I fight for you my love.
I don't know If I will live,
I doubt I will survive,
Blood is flowing now,
My life slowly fades as I die,
My sword is drawn,
My hope is waining,
Stabbing and cutting,
Life is fading,
This is my last chance to thank you,
I'm so sorry that after all you've done,
I couldn't save you.
You said you'd always be there,
So for so long I felt no fear,
We used to be so much stronger,
Now nothings left,
Why did you have to leave,
Now I die.
All alone,
I cry again,
Tears mingle with blood,
It's raining again,
A clap of thunder,
A thrust of my blade,
The killing can't end now,
Are there any lives that still deserve to be saved.
It's a lovely sentiment,
Goodbye forever,
Memory's fade,
But never leave.
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Comment how you will, I return comments, and I appreciate when people read my poetry. That is all I have to say.
Written September 25th, 2005
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this poem...
i can't even find anything to be critical about. i love it so much, love poetry in general, becuase i can always find some way to connect with the words and thats an amazing feeling. this poem nails that. i feel everything you have written here. it is so well written, and the flow is amazing.
"This is my last chance to thank you,
I'm so sorry that after all you've done,
I couldn't save you." is my favorite line.
beautiful, really. -
It rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. made me cry though
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The Rain Of Blood Mingles With Tears ,. nice ,. i loved the name ,. opening stanza ,. middle ,. closing stanza ,. really ,. i found your style very dark yet discriptive ,. good flow ,. it was a really enjoyed read all around ,. bravo ,. thanks for sharing ,.
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