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Shafts of Gold

An array of gold
Bright shafts of lucent sunshine
Preceding the dusk

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I wrote this about a sunset, using indirect imagery to imply this.  Good luck, everyone!
Written September 25th, 2005

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  • grannyeri gold member
    September 25, 2005
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    A lovely image of a sunset.