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Faith Hope And Love

Hope is wishing
for dreams to come true
for love overcast will become anew,
and for strength of peace which we have love
guardian angels flying so high above.

So high up in the beautiful sun-shone sky,
makes you feel like your up ahigh.
Love shall remain a mystery
before you shall set forth a diversity.

Faith shall never become known
unless the words of wisdom are shown.
Love, hope and faith are all as one
but love is the greatest of everyone.

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Written September 25th, 2005

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  • xAmor omnia vincitx
    January 11, 2006
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    this is really well written... great write!!

    hana

  • LyricalHeritage
    January 2, 2006
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    These last two lines "Love, hope and faith are all as one
    but love is the greatest of everyone." bring everything together wonderfully. Good job and tbanks for sharing.


  • bluidbabiegirl
    October 25, 2005
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    this is beautiful...

  • Dance-for-life
    October 15, 2005
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    I love how in the end you said love is the greatest of them all, because I truly believe that. Very nice, this was perfect for a poem of simple love.
    *Bella*


  • Rivage
    September 27, 2005
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    Yes indd well said, I like how you used one of my favorite sayings all time to create a simple, lovely piece! Thank you so much for entering a new enty, it is highly appreciated.. Love Rivage

  • rosebud
    September 25, 2005
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    yes well said, simple of Love... congratz!

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