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Me and You (you and me)

last night was our very first date
so excited i just couldnt wait
i was so nervous all i did was talk
but we held hands and we went for a walk
me and you, you and me
sometimes i feel like we're meant to be
you dont have to say a stupid line
cause my hand in yours fits just fine
i put my head on your shoulder
and my hand on your heart
we just lay there in the grass
nothing could tear us apart
your hand in my fingers
yours in my hair
a feeling of comfort
knowing that you care
i look in your eyes
as you gaze into mine
just seeing your smile
makes me whole heart shine
being with you made me realize
thats its not all about whats in the outside
its the connection from within
its like a prize you cant win
its you and me, me and you
your hand in mine and theres nothing i cant do
its me and you, you and me
sometimes i feel like we're meant to be

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Written September 25th, 2005

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  • Crazi Beautyful
    November 2, 2005
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    This is really cute !!! im so glad youve found someone who makes you so happy!!!! .. .


  • Babyruth714
    September 26, 2005
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    aww coote!

    awww I'm so sensitive to Love poems right now so I can't say much, finally nice to see something positive on this site, and so glad ur doing wonderful, this was beautifully descriptive,beautiful tone,and a consisten flow Ruth


  • rising-2-be-seen
    September 25, 2005
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    aaaaaaawwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!! hannah!! thats soo sweet!! you must be really happy with luke! good for you! I LOVE YOU BABE! peace

    ♥*-*Jovana*-*♥


  • ImUrFadingMemory
    September 25, 2005
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    AW thats cute i read it to my boyfriend