We all have it
we all do it
when it dosen't work
we scream and hit it
we also call it names
we should feel ashamed
for it has feelings too
it's being abused and used by me and you
we all use it
we all play with it
but when it dosen't work right
we all scream and fight
but relax
when it does work its great
we talk to our friends
and also play games
we all love our computers
but when it dosen't work right
we just wish we had a different one
Author notes
Written September 24th, 2005
A contest entry
- A contest for humor by caesarjager.
378 points, ended March 5, 2006, 16 entries
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This is cute, I like the length, when something is too long I end up not reading all of it. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck to you in all you do in life.
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Yes this is very true. I like this piece, too short for me though...lol I can sense your style of writing is writing short pieces, while my style is long pieces lol. BUT I DO love it, very unique.
Thanks for sharing,
Melissa -
Two thumbs up!
LOL...too true! I can relate and I loved this humorous write.
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