im sorry about all the hasle
that i gave you
text you and phoning you
but i can't let you go
i found out you have someone else
want to drop dead
hoped that you and me would get back
people say forget about him
but i can't let you go
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Written September 24th, 2005
A contest entry
- Love Sucks by Ms Tinkerbell.
300 points, ended October 14, 2005, 22 entries
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Yeah,...people do feel like this when they lose someone they loved. They just can't let them go. It's just too hard. You just can't forget someone you once held dear. I know. Good luck in your contest. Great poem. I really enjoyed it.
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Good Poem
No Ms Tinkerbell trying to forget someone you love is impossible over time and sometimes it can take along time, your heart comes to except it, I guess it all just depends on how much you loved that person as to how long it's going to take. For my husband it was when I closed the door and left when he forget so I guess he didn't love me that much to begin with, but for me it has been over a year now and still I think of him most everyday.
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Overall, beautiful and raw emotion
Hmmmm, this poem is very raw, and very moving. Your overall effect was very depressind. You conveyed you emotions clearly, and if you added a few more verses and a chorus, this would make a really good song. Your obviously very disturbed, and you feel betrayed, and this is an incredible poem. Don't give up trying or living. -
Im so sorry that you feel this way ... In so few words my heart is now aching for you (and a little for me as I am relating to this) It is a nice portrayal of your clear emotions for someone. I was hoping that people enetering where going to tell me that its easy to forget someone but its not looking that way. I hope soon you will feel better hon, thank you for entering. Love Tink xx
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