Cool air flowing through my hair,
colored leaves falling from trees,
carved pumpkins out on doorsteps,
looking to the floor,
feet clad in boots,
owls begin to hoot
as you are now here
and fall is in the air.
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Written September 24th, 2005
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you make me miss the changing seasons.
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i luv this poem. i love nature and am glad to see you wrote about it. i love drawing fall and writing about it especially. fall is one of my favorite seasons. great job. short simple and sweet. luv it. thx for all the comments and applause!!!
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Wow, this is great. I love fall and you hit almost all the main points! You have great poetry, I'm definately going to read some of your other ones. Great imagery and awesome write. Keep it up!
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This is sweet and brings back memories. Such sensual experiences (at least of those particular things) are rare in the city.
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crystadust 24-09-05 22:28
This is such a lovely little poem. Full of autumn colours and scents. Just great. -
This piece reminds me of some of the reasons that fall is one of my favorite seasons. I am glad that fall is here and that I got to read this great piece of work. Thanks!
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That was a lovely descriptive write.I enjoyed this
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That was very lovely.I liked it alot.
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