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Mysteries of Love

Crying through the night that drives me wild,
can't you see these feelings are more than mild?
I wait until the coming of your sweet presence,
killing and dusting off the peasants,
Sapphire like Gold my heart is waiting to hold the truth,
as I can hope your good words are not a myth,
Rolling around in the mud,
as my heart sheds a little blood,
seeking the message that few have been told,
waiting for this mystery to unfold,
sitting and listening in my wedding gown,
silencing my past frown,
My eyes have overcome with glistening shadow,
as I wait for you in this precious meadow.

-The Words of Fluffy-

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Written September 24th, 2005

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  • reaper of chaos
    September 25, 2005
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    Great descriptions

    Beautiful write. I like how much description you put throughout every inch of the poem. I also like how well you express your emotions here. Great write keep it up.