Labour,
Intensified
By anticipation,
Erupts in an instant of pain.
New life.
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Written for the contest 'The Perfect Moment: Cinquain'
by Ava Noire
Did not win.
Written September 24th, 2005
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There is no rhyme or reason to some of the contests. I just pick and choose the ones I think are run fairly honest. At the end of the day, it is still up to the whims of the host.
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I like this. Im surprised it didnt win. The words are well chosen and impart a clear picture. Good write. I think these shorter poem forms are hardest, but you seem to have a talent for it.
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Each word is carefully chosen to create just the right sensation. This is a well written piece, as was your other entry. I enjoyed both. Thanks for entering.
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Thank you. I try. LOL
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Thank you. I have four, and the feeling was always the same.
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Perfect said in just a few words in perfect form This was absolute an amazing piece of art from your hand. Good luck in this contest Herman
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Good cinquain you have created here. I have three children...and I can relate to this one so very well. Good luck in the contest.
LIZ
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