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The Depths of Night (Cinquain)



Rhythm.
Bodies moving,
Juxtaposed against sheets,
Glistening with the endeavours
Of love.



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Written for the contest 'The Perfect Moment: Cinquain'
by Ava Noire
Did not win.


Written September 24th, 2005

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  • Ava Noire silver member
    September 25, 2005
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    Juxtaposed against sheets,

    Love that line. It is very creative, and for me the heart of the poem. Excellent work Rous. Thanks for your entry.


  • Forms of Me
    September 24, 2005
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    This is is a very lovely cinquain. You have captured the beauty of this specific moment so well within this short form.

    Great work.
    Good Luck in the contest.

    LIZ