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Thoughts from Figure Modeling Session 9-21-05 [Obstruction]

You paint the background and I'm the
obstruction
We fill out the lights and shadows
the curvation of my body focuses the air
black and grey
on the white of my skin
I breathe     so still
as you create a world
of unbounded beauty prompted from my form

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Written September 23rd, 2005

A contest entry

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  • eskimo found
    October 11, 2005
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    hahah yes i really am a nude model for art classes. its really fun and easy and makes a lot of money! thank you for reading my poem!!!

  • roolbreaker
    October 11, 2005
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    ha ha!

    wow! are you a nude model??? that would be soooo hot!
    oh man...this poem got me...ha ha, very consise and right to the point.explained all the reader neede to know.in a very artistic way.
    good job here!


  • forgotten dream
    September 28, 2005
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    wow. this is an amazing write. i love the inspiration of this, and as an artist i appreciate and adore the images you create. a refreshing read that i enjoyed very much. thank you for entering and best of luck in the contest <3


  • capricornpoet
    September 26, 2005
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    a little muse for a painter as he creates form and contours,
    lovely imagery .