spirits flow
thru my mind
of another time
and place
lingering thoughts
of love and laughter
come and go
from long ago
disappointment
for promises forgotten
can’t get back
that which I lost
over flowing emotions
of things I do not know
not understanding
of where I need to go
bring me the answers
show me the way
I can’t leave now
I must forever stay
lead me to the flowers
that bloom in the spring
show me the answers
give me the key
~Lady Raven~
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Just words coming in, making no since to me.
Written September 23rd, 2005
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I am clueless to what it is saying, if you can shed some light it would be much appreciated.
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Who wants a DRAGON?
Strange...I get a completely different vibe. I see a future place, not one in the past. Just think about it...might be nothing. But I see it. It's real.
Very precious and soft poem, very touching, I love these...they say so much when the poem itself is so small, yet concise. Love the art too...have you found my secret stash? LOL! Great job M'lady. (WOOF!) Get offa me ya big DOG!
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Wonderfully written. So much peace in this piece. ~~Shannon~~
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Tho this may make no sense to you sweety your words tell me how
Bad your feeling inside and how bad you need to get away from your frustrations this beautiful and very angelic penned poem thank you for allowing me to read the words of your heart..
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