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Still we cry

As we sit watching are television things go on outside of our little home.
There are people dying
water rising
children screaming
people steeling
but do we care about this incident?
NO
its at the back of our mind, its the "little thing"
but not to me, i cry and pray every night for new orleans to get better,
the levee fixed,home4s and hearts repaired....
i want to help so bad but all i can do i support, its the least i can do.
and it can be the least YOU can do.
so here me out and feel what the victims feel!

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New Orleans Dogpaddles To Greatness
Written September 23rd, 2005

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  • iwishuponastar14
    September 24, 2005
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    Great job sonja. this poem is truly emotional and empathetic. Althou u may want to check the spelling!! otherwise this is a great write, keep it up!
    xoxox
    good luck in the contest
    kay <3