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My Love Has Gone

I breathe my last tonight
Too abandoned to go on
I’m not all right
For my love has gone.

Bare, blank, lost walls
Inside of me
It’s where my heart falls
As it was once free

Suffocating without your affection
Slowly withering away
For we’ve lost all connection
And my hope is turning grey

My emotions of glass
Have shattered on the ground
And nothing can surpass
For I am forever bound

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Written September 23rd, 2005

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