Spring moments fly through the air
Walking down that long lonely park
With only the woman that ever made me melt
To see her smile as she turn to call your name
She'll skip to you, grasping your hands
Pulling you to see the birds flying across the cherry blossom sky
Not paying attention as you dream about her every problems
Put a smile on your face and she'll lean up to kiss your lonely lips
You hold her hips...
Slowly sliding your hands into her dirty blonde hair
Throwing away every fear of her ever running away from your arms
Opening your eyes slowly as she smile from our first kiss
She pulls you to sit down under the tree
Confused on how she tripped
Catching her fall as we roll down the hill near the lake
Laughing at how well her joke played out
I had my first date with just a kiss
Author notes
Written September 23rd, 2005
A contest entry
- Love Insanly by Daisuke.
300 points, ended September 26, 2005, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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OMFG I LOVE THIS POEM. this is so freaking awesome. it's so sweet. and the background is cool to (
- pweciouspuppie). it's so incredibly sweet. i seriously can't think of anything else. it's so good it's utterly undiscribable!!! lol. it's true though. it's so good! and there is no way you could have written this with no girl in mind. the tought is just too well played out. it's too emotional. ok, give it up. who is it? lol.
~Addie~ -
Wow, i love the feelings portrayed in this poem. Although it's not complicated or very embellished, the simplicity of this poem is really all it needs. The first kiss part- really nice. Great write!
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I still think this is a cool poem. Its cute
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hey, thats cute, the background is cute too.Best of luck kido.
~Alea -
Great write
Great write..Good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Betty -
Whee!!! I totally drew this backround
Edited on Sep 25, 6:30 p.m. because ''.
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