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forever

Forever she walks
In the hope of love
Forever she dreams
OF hope against hate
Forever she will never
Stop loving you

She hopes you love her
She hopes you care
She hopes that you
Will forever be there

He hopes you will never be in denial
Of the things in your past
Of the things you regret
Hate
He hopes that you
will be forever there

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Written September 23rd, 2005

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  • Beastial Wench
    December 6, 2005
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    The middle stanza is the best in my opinion. It simply flows the best and rolls off the tongue. A lovely write.


  • Hirestel
    September 30, 2005
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    If I had four arms it would be four thumbs up

    This is so awesome weasel! It's even got the rhyme and everything! Such a great poem. So full of emotion, description, and so easily flowing...Awesome!