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Sweet little Rose

Sweet Little Rose .

        Little rose's . Little Rose's .
            Grandma's Little
                 Angel

           Poem written by
        Dillon,T,Terry.age 8
           09/23/05.

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Written September 23rd, 2005

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  • Your Hine Us
    October 7, 2005
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    Thanks ronnie62 he is really a happy boy getting realy nice comments like yours makes him want to write more so he will be posting more later this I am realy sure .


  • ronnie62
    October 6, 2005
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    very cute a budding writer there I think.


  • Your Hine Us
    October 5, 2005
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    Thank you D-P. Dillon is really happy about his poem,I think he made it for Dusty's baby girl,I need to ask him I guess.well I will show him all his comment's next time he come's over.later gater .love ya .


  • Dark-Princess
    October 3, 2005
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    This is sweet! He is allready a little poet! I can't wait to see the little cutie pie
    Dark-Princess


  • Your Hine Us
    October 3, 2005
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    Thanks michele la pointe for your kind comment,my grandson is so happy about all the comment's he has gotten on his poem,again I say thank's .


  • Michele La Pointe
    September 30, 2005
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    what a sweet lil poem... i love to see young kids writing poems... it really brings out the 'angel' in all of them... i loved this


  • Your Hine Us
    September 30, 2005
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    Dillon says thanks so much,your comment put a smile on his face so I say thank you too .


  • Unbridled1
    September 29, 2005
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    awwwww...how very sweet to come across this

    it put a smile on my face!

    UB


  • Ava Noire silver member
    September 25, 2005
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    Dillion is quite the little poet isn't he. His work is priceless. My mother kept mine and after all these years I read what I wrote and smile


  • Forms of Me
    September 25, 2005
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    aww..this is really good for an 8 year old. Smile...I have a nine year old who is slowly developing an interest in writing.
    LIZ


  • Your Hine Us
    September 25, 2005
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    Ok to tell the truth I did help Dillon a little with his spelling but the rest was all him.everyones comments on his poem has made him so happy I am sure I will be posting more of his poems in the days ahead,again thanks you have made his day or week or maybe more Doris.


  • Your Hine Us
    September 25, 2005
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    Thanks FD,Dillon is so happy he is telling everyone about his poem,he is glad so many people like it as much as he does.again thank you .

  • misticmoonlite gold member
    September 25, 2005
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    goodness he is a darned good poet, rhyms well and knows his spelling and words well great job! Linda


  • FifthDove gold member
    September 24, 2005
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    Aweeeeee. This is so darn sweet. Tell him he did a great job at writing his first poem, and that it is a doozy...


  • Your Hine Us
    September 24, 2005
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    Thanks so much Huntress,Dillon is a happy boy right now,he has a smile as big as his head,so I say thanks so much for your kind comment .


  • Your Hine Us
    September 24, 2005
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    My grandson is so happy people are reading and commenting on his poem so thanks so very much,Dillon was real proud that it made you smile .


  • Your Hine Us
    September 24, 2005
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    Thanks Patty,boy Dillon is so proud of his poem and the fact that everyone is commenting on it,he is a happy little boy right now,so I say thanks so much for makeing him so happy,love ya me .


  • Huntress silver member
    September 23, 2005
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    This is very sweet. Very cool

  • happy bunny lavish1
    September 23, 2005
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    awww! That's so cute! I loved it! It put a smile on my face. Great job!


  • fourth coming
    September 23, 2005
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    Awesome

    GREAT job Dillon this is so cute and she is a cute lil
    lots of my love your Great Aunt Patty


  • Your Hine Us
    September 23, 2005
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    I told my grandson about your comment and he said COOL what is their name he wants me to ask I told him no they go by MetallicxRose,ahyhoo Dillon says thanks so much .

  • OurxBeginning Greeters member
    September 23, 2005
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    Aaaw this is cute. I like how you did it. It's short, but good. Wonderful job, and keep up the great work.

    ~MxR

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