The sting of being betrayed is fresh in my mind.
The words of betrayal are fresh in my ear.
The betrayal itself is as cold as ice.
Betrayal is what all dread yet all experience.
A friend’s betrayal is one of certain regret.
A friend’s betrayal is one of major distrust.
The friend is no friend, and the betrayal is no betrayal.
The betrayal is nothing more than the truth of
What the friend thought to begin with.
The betrayal is nothing more than disrespect
Planned from the beginning of the friendship.
The betrayal is nothing more than a knife in my back
That was meant for me all along.
This betrayal is what you only expect from people you
Could never depend on from the establishment of the companionship.
The betrayal is dreadful and this poem is payback!
Author notes
#5
Written September 22nd, 2005
A contest entry
- Betrayal by Neon Lights.
300 points, ended October 28, 2005, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is awesome. I love how you described betryal. It is so many things and you managed to capture that. Very nice. This flowed very well and I like the tone of it. Thanks for entering and good luck!
~Fi~
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Thanks, sAnitarium, for the comment....A friend's betrayal is truely a pain that is undescriable, but I tried to explain it...Thanks again....
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betrayal of friends, one of the worst things to do to your friends,well penned and expressed great job
good luck in the contest and thanks for entering
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Thanks for giving the advice
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great poem
that is a whole lot better thanks for taking the advice -
Thanks for letting me know....I will change the background
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A LITTLE HARD TO READ WITH THE DARK BACKGROUND BUT STILL GREAT WORK
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