Death mirrors in their eyes,
they all crave the same,
bloody souls to be their feasts.
Little beasts are they,
with wings blacker than night.
Fiery crimson eyes,
fear injecting screams.
Enthralled with death and pain.
Ravaging through all that's wonderful.
Filling dreams with graveyard fantasies.
Ripping apart all that resides in the light.
Their eyes entrance you,
cause you to lose all sense of being.
Constant screeches racing through your mind
until you finally give in and become one of them.
They creep through the darkness of shadows
they change forms in the daylight,
lure you to them and seduce you.
Even after they have finished and are gone,
you can still feel them.
their essence rages through your veins.
You start to go insane,
losing all track of time and life.
Some through themselves to their death from windows and ledges.
some slit their own wrists or necks.
some stab themselves in the chest
until life no longer runs through their bodies.
They call it,
the Kiss of the Deadly Angels!
Author notes
Written September 22nd, 2005
A contest entry
- ALMOST Anything! by Shakari.
318 points, ended September 23, 2005, 5 entries
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eerie and damn good!!!!! i love your use of words and description(think i spelled that wrong but who cares) i had a really good picture going around in my head. good luck in the contest! this one looks like a winner!
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This piece so so dark and awesome! I would have never thought of it, but you have used such wonderful descriptions, some vivid imagery, and have a way with words! I am delighted after reading this piece(Since it was dark, does that make me the evil prson that will someday rule the world?...LOL!) Well, you did an awesome job and I am wishing you the best of luck in the contest!
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