Here I go again
Helplessly falling for someone
You don't even like me back
Do you not understand?
[I.n.e.e.d.y.o.u]
I need to be more than friends
I need to have you there for me at all times
I need you all to myself
Don't leave me here
[a.l.o.n.e]
You know how I feel
So
Why ignore it?
Can't you even try to return the feeling?
I suppose not
You're not like other guys
You're real
You're honest
...You're beautiful...
in mind, body, and spirit
in everything you do
Why can't I make you see
How complete you would make my life?
Author notes
This is about the kid I like. I like him so much and he knows and everything but I can't make him like me. It's seriously depressing me. I've never had this problem before so I don't even know what to do. We're friends and everything but I want to be more than that.
Written September 22nd, 2005
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Very powerful and raw emotion. The poetry the itself is absolutely wonderful. I like your style of writing because I can easily relate to it. This is very raw emotion and I think that you would write better about this if you would think and sort your feelings deeper in yourself. It is very great. Keep up the good work.
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I really liked this, very true, and I can relate, awesome job, and keep it up! I hope to read more
~MxR
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For that being real life, it was very very good...I liked the form and also the way it looked like you paused after every couple of words...as if to say to him everything you were feeling but trying to make it come out right or something...brilliant.
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i am feeling this way too... but i am a bit home-wrecker about it because i am married(seperated) and he is married(divorcing). nice write. flows well and shows your emotions.
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Ouch. I know what you feel like, its really depressing. This is a very well written. Good Job!
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this is really good. i can see the hurt and longing for this guy...great jod and keqep up the good work....
~*~Kat~*~ -
hey, this is a really good poem, and ive felt like this before. but the olny thing you can do is just be his friend and if its ment to be it will happen. the better friends yall become the more he might start to like you, just be there for him as a friend frist. Your poems really good and i hope you get a chance to check out mine.
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