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you just dont know

you dont know what its like to be me
to be seen
to be ignored

youve never had to feel the pain of a lonely heart
or the burning passion of a dream
you dont know what its like to be me

some may think that its not that hard to be happy
and some may say that theres plenty of fish in the sea
but i say you just dont know what its like to be me

to be seen but ignored
to be talked to, but never listened to
to love but get non back
to help whos needed
but never helped when you need it
you dont know what its like to be me

a mask covers your face
hides the truth
makes you numb
makes you ignorant
tells you lies
till all thats real has died
you dont see what its like to be me

you just dont know

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Written September 22nd, 2005

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  • Gold-feathers
    November 30, 2007

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    I see what it's like to be you to feel lonely. I've friends whom I've given all my love all my sincerities and they've betrayed, I've loved someone from every little part of my heart but no return, I've felt the hallowness of the fake world, I've endured the hatred and I've been ignored the way you would've never thought of. I've felt every little pain in the world. I love to have friends to gve ppl but can't get any. Oh got bit carried away Well its a wonderfull piece I loved it and its a deep voice of a bleeding heart Am I right? Hope you get rid of loneliness best of luck! Bye!(Tragedy Lover)