every one wishes pain would go away
what about happiness
it's not bliss
it's fake
is every one fucking ignorant
is every think okay
in their head
even through their whole family is dead
do they just believe it was their time to go
that God needed them
that it was all part of a huge plan
that's bull bunny that's bunnyed up lies
that's them controlling you
and you believing their ignorant lies!
if you believe in him it will be okay
but as i sit here believing him
my pain and fake happiness don't go away
I'm not okay
blood every where
in the bathroom and on the floor
my family is dead because
of his so called plan
and i slit my wrist
i don't know if it was
part of the plan
but it happened
now God has my blood on his hands
i hope i didn't mess up the plan!
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Written September 21st, 2005
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i believe in god and i do believe there is some thing better than us and ever thing i just dont believe in some perfect plan it i snot perfect if it leave the ones you love sad it is just not but yeah i guess the has to be some kinda of plan but every thing is messed up nothing is perfect not even god or hos son nothing in my opinion!
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Hey, this is a really good poem even if I didn't agree with the message in it. Personally, I do not believe that we should blame God for taking the people we love away from us. I know that people do, I have will and I am sure I will again. However, God's plan is perfect, even if I sometimes hate it. So yeah...now I am just rambling...well, I am off to read more of your work! You are truly an amazing poet.
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wow this is a great poem. keep up the good work and cant wait to read more, ur such a great writer
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I didn't like what this poem was about. i liked the poem tho. God doesn't take ppl from earth. just becuz ppl die doesn't mean god did it. thats wut is wrong with ppl now days, they blame god for EVERYTHING then they wonder why they r miserable and they wonder why god isn't suddenly making all their wishes true. U have to do more than believe in him, anyone can belive that god is there. Do u follow him? thats the question. u can believe something is there yet not nessessarly follow it. Follow the footsteps of Jesus and u will learn that he makes everything okay. But until u do then ur gunna remain lost and blaming him for everything. good poem tho, just thought i'd tell u that...~Jamie~
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i love this so much its awesome and i love you anDI COMMENTED FIRST HEEEEEEEEEEEEEL YEA LOL well neway great job luv ya lots ~lissa~
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