As the moonlight beams off your long, dark hair
I see my forever within your eyes
Nowing that you are the fateful queen of the earth
My fervor for you is eternal, undying
I am falling in love with you again
The audacious desire lies within your mausoleum
This night is bleeding with amorous passion
I will never forsake you, I will never rue our love
For you are the heart that breathes me
Wines to be sipped into our cemetary wedding
Sapphire lips to be the burning rose
Grasp upon silhouettes and feed my blood
I love every part of you and everything about you
Rechristen this amorous life as a seraphic leviathan
Enthralled in the night
I lust a gift upon you
Nocturnal daze lay upon our hearts and our merging soul
Falling in love with you again
Silhouettes in deep passion and enslaved by your gilded love
Our love shall prevail as I romance you
As long as I am in perception of your mist
Nothing is trivial around you
The aura that concieves you is an Utopia of it's own
Recreation of our amorous grave is the next moonrise
I am falling in love with you again
The wine sips your kiss for the dark rose
Enshadowed in blodd-cold nights and sullen darkness
We lust in love for passionate moonlight
Send forth an audacious fog, an untold romance
Falling in love with you again
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(for contest: I commented on MoonyYunie's poem)
Written September 21st, 2005
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*dies* awesome! i love the words you chose; they're perfect! the passion is so evident and real. i can tell it consumes you. i can identify with this a lot, but mainly this line, "I see my forever within your eyes" i know how that is... the flow of this poem is gentle, not forced and there is a ton of symbolism in your talk of mausoleums and such. my take on it is that love will kill you if you let it but if you find the right person you dont mind going down with it if thats what it takes. that may not be you're intention for the meaning, but either way it's a powerful message!
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Very deep, very pretty. I could feel exactly what you were writing, and it was beautiful. Thanks for entering my contest, and good luck!!!
~Alicia~
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