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Infinite Love


Infinite Love

Feelings that flow
always so freely,
From the depths of my heart
Swell up
Into intense emotion
Overcomes me,
Rendering me speechless and defenseless.

Only for you
"A loving heart'n'soul,"
I lay at your feet,
To be lifted up;
Cherished,
In the equality of true love.

Always dreaming...wishing...
A "kiss of faith is what I beg"  from you
Telling me
it's Eternity,
with only me
You desire to share

Apart now,
feelings of love composed for you,
I eagerly anticipate
our next meeting, where I,
melted by love,
am reduced to giddy grins and bliss
cover you with kisses once more.

But until then,
I must accept, that
While "lost in my own world"
where you "touch me with your love"
is through dreams from slumber.
While I long for time to pass quickly
Until we are together, again
Reunited,
You remain, for now,
My Nightwish;
Always keeping thoughts of you
in my mind and heart and soul.
~ ♥ ~

Author notes

*Nightwish: Once*
"lost in my own world" (Dead Gardens)
"touch me with your love" (Nemo)
"kiss of faith is what I beg" (Romanticide)
"A loving heart'n'soul" (Romanticide)

\...And yes, I actually listened to the CD when I wrote this!! \

Written September 15th, 2005

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  • FifthDove
    April 6, 2006
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    This is a very touching love poem and it seems as though this is genuinely penned for a very special person. I think they must be lucky to have you on their side. Lovely poem Cindy


  • Cara Rose
    January 26, 2006
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    ~sigh~ Amazing piece. You always seem to write with such a pure nature. Such innocence in your words of love. Well done dear. Keep up the amazing posts.


  • DarkDaze
    December 14, 2005
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    Nighwish, is a great band. their lyrics are powerful and their music is so unique and classic. I love them. I also love your poem. It incorporates such strong love. It's beautiful.


  • spamwitch
    December 9, 2005
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    Beautiful poem, not familiar with the band, but I adore the gothic opera style music, are they similar to Dead Can Dance?


  • zillion
    November 22, 2005
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    awww what a lovely poem! Its so uplifting.lol you don't read many poems like these anymore. I was reading your authos page an saw you were from GA. What part?(you dont have to tell me but I live in Atlanta so just curios) anyways the poem is beautiful!

    -Faithful Dreamer

  • Ir.muse
    November 20, 2005
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    A lovely love poem.

  • passionsdaughter
    November 8, 2005
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    Beautiful

    Wow, Glad that I stopped in to read this piec! It brushes the heartstrings of ones heat. Full of desire and longing. Very well done! Beautiful!!

    Nicole

  • Brokenpen
    October 27, 2005
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    awesome write

    wow this was beautiful and sweet.. i felt the love in this write.. well done. thank you for sharing your words with me.


  • Pink Absinthe
    September 23, 2005
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    this is great! just enough compare-ability to nightwish that its not just like the song! great dat u listened 2 album while writing, gives it a real soul! well done, thsi is emotional and its filled with the grace and power that Nightwish embodies! Well done!


  • Blazing White Wolf
    September 21, 2005
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    this is quite the beautiful write Julie sigh with love that reigns strong within your heart and soul and a hint of yearning for the one that isn't constantly at your side. Nightwish has wonderful music and words that quite touching in their unique style. You took these titles and weaved a true piece of art well done, my mistress/wench just love lovely loveiness for us to read
    love
    Blaze


  • queen Moderators member
    September 21, 2005
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    Beautiful poetry you have here my dear


  • Almighty Aphrodite gold member
    September 21, 2005
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    I have not yet heard any of Nightwish's music, but I have heard people talk about their style...and I have seen a few of their lyrics scattered around here and there. I have been wondering how such beautiful lyrics get paired with a haunting, operatic gothic style. Hmmm... Enough jumping off on a tangent for me, though, I think that this is romantic and gorgeous. I haven't had these feelings visit me for quite some time now, and I feel bad that I can't relate these days. Ah, well...

    It is amazing how people take the words of someone else and create a bauble of beauty around them. I can't seem to achieve this feat to save my life. I think you will do very well in the contest.



    Many blessings,

    Raven Aurora

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