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how am i?

am i the person who sits there and cries,
am i the person who stands there and lies!

am i the person i a person who beats you to the ground,
am i a person who Dare's make a sound,

am the person who holds you when you scream,
am i the person who steals your ice cream,

am i the person who steals bottles of wine,
i don't know who i am but I'll find out in time!

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Written September 21st, 2005

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  • Faeleigh
    September 21, 2005
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    Nice write.. very interseting.. i liked it though not quite sure what i got out of it but its a nice write...