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The Day After Yesterday

There's so much I need to do
Many errands to accomplish
Look at the time and how it flew!

I'll make a list
Things I need to get done
No time to think about things I've missed.

   1) Get a life, start something new.
   2) Take a test (remember to review).
   3) Keep my wits, get through college with good grades.
   4) Start a family, I'm getting up there in age.
   5) Begin a career and go with the flow.
   6) Plant a garden, sit back and watch my flowers grow.
   7) Stay close at heart with family and friends.
   8) Realise I need to tie up lose ends.

So many things, can't start too late
The day after yesterday will have to wait
For I realise I need to start today!

Author notes

I tried being humerous about this poem.  I'm not very good at writing funny poetry but I gave it a try.  I used the choice "The Day After Yesterday".
Written September 21st, 2005

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  • Wolf of Night
    September 21, 2005
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    The day after yesterday will have to wait
    For I realise I need to start today!

    So true true true! It is not lacking humor although some people dont have the same taste of humor as others so you might find alot of people dont find it funny or understand the humor in it! I do understand the humor and enjoyed this piece. Thanks for entering and good luck!