Akin to my pear
the air is crisp, fresh and cool
both give me goosebumps
Author notes
Autumn is on it's way so I thought I'd right a haiku to welcome the change in climate. 
Written September 21st, 2005
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This is a lovely Haiku!
IfWinterHadaName 10-04-05 -
nice haiku Belle, it is very well written, i like the adjectives too, like "crisp" instead of boring ol' cold(yawn) great word and great poem,
best of luck
best wishes as always
Shimmering River
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This was a great haiku extremely descriptive you could feel autumn just by reading it Crazy xxx
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I think that your writing just keeps getting better! I read some a few weeks ago and thought that it was wonderful, but this is even better! You used great imagery(in a way) and made me feel the goosebumps.
I loved the choice in words, the beauty, and how you made its theme 'seasonal changes!' Though my favorite season is Summer, you have made me appreciate Autumn a bit more!
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a very lovely tribute to it too.....this is very beautifuly expressed....love goosebumps....and the thoughts that bring them.....wonderful haiku
Malabu -
What is not to get? I must admit though that my teeth don't like the crisp ones only the soft and juicy kind! You just described a morning in Minnesota during our fall. Perfect!
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Very, Very Good
Nothing better than chilled fresh fruit. I can only think of one or two things better than a breath of new morning air before the rest of the world wakes up
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Nicely done. I like the idea of a chilled pear or even one baked with a bit of brandy.
A good read
thanks for your comment.
John -
Akin to my "pear"? Or do you mean "peer". I don't really get it. Anna.
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Lovely
Nothing wrong with sizing up the competition. I rather like yours as well.
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